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    dots Submission Name: Echoes of Daddots
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    Author: rtx2
    Elite Ratio:    1.46 - 7/2/4
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I wrote this after Dad died. It was my release


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    dotsEchoes of Daddots
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    Echoes of Dad


    It’s been days and I know he’s gone.
    But so many things still speak his name.
    In the hall, the books unused quietly call.
    The picture on the wall stares back at me,
    With eyes that pierce my reality.
    His clock, it marks the passing
    Not really noticing the emptiness,
    but keeping vigil with a tick tock, tick tock.
    A little piece of me goes with him.
    Existing as a thread by which the memories run.
    A time will come, they won’t hurt as bad.
    A time I can say without the tears,
    “I miss my dad!”




    Submitted on 2006-03-21 12:09:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      such depth from such a short poem. a clear representation of the feelings you can unleash and share though poetry. keep writing.
    Bambi xxx
    | Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by bambieyed | [ Reply to This ]
      sad...sad indeed. I'm glad that you found some way to release some pain. I know this sounds corny...but everytime you write about him, a part of him lives. everytime you look in the mirror, a part of him lives. every tear you'll ever shed, or a smile of rememberance will always bring a part of your father back...
    sorry for your loss
    | Posted on 2006-03-21 00:00:00 | by MmR | [ Reply to This ]



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