Description: well, i'm aware theres a line in here from a previous poem i wrote, but i'm trying to decide in which poem to keep it. for those of you who have read the poem with this line, let me know. if you havent, don't worry about it. tell me what you think.
oh my goodness, its very good, but so sad. you know? i hate thinking of all the child abuse and how aldults leave their children behind. its so heartbreaking. man, you are very deep because children, when they are alone, they have nothing or no one to hold and hang onto, and it deeply breaks my heart for many children to experience that kind of life, and hopefully, we can help because in this age, we are always thinking of ourselves. excellent write. peace.