When you are one like me, who hides in the shadows when it comes to relationships out of fear of being hurt, you are exposed in this poem. Demanded to be open but not from these feelings you have. The shortness makes it not very emotional.
This was simple yet eloquent and with little musings of love - reveal yourself to me & do not hide in the shadows where so much hides - be my light & my way! very well done girl! Love makes a difference doesn't "IT"! love,peace,joy&smilez 2 share tif
itís good , I like it , specially when you said : Here's my heart, Don't make it bleed. It's just that for the rhyme in lust and trust, it didnít seem pretty good , itís like in trust isnít in its perfect place you know , anyway maybe it's just me, but in general it was good :) p.s: thanks for adding my :Ēyou in me ď to your favorites
Simple and sweet. Nicely put and very eloquent. It's so short, I can't find much, if anything wrong with it. The theme is clear and dipicted well, and the emotion was strong. Hehe, it's interesting that the review is longer than the actuall piece, whatev. Short pieces can be just as amazing as the long ones. Lovely piece. Much luv.
i like this. it is love in the darkness but because its so short, for some reason i dont like the rhyming all that much. but its pretty cool. sorry i didnt have much to say. i have a lack of words right now. <3