these lines were really cool. i didn't read To You so i really don't get what points u were trying to get across but i do like the poem even if i'm oblivious to the meaning behind. it. oh yeah Song of Solomon kicks ass!
I am kinda confused, maybe it is too early, but this meaning was lost to me. I dod however like the actual words in this piece, the obvious emotin, I think I just don't get it..
This seems to be directed to someone...because of title and content. It shows alot of lothing and disgust. A very abstract work. It conveys feelings, but I am lost in detail, leaves me to wonder who caused these feelings and how. If it was someone you know and you gave it to thembecause they had wronged you...I am sure they would know right away how you felt. But to the common reader it is much harder to desern.
Submission Name: To You
