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    dots Submission Name: My Herodots
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    Author: Linkins_knot
    ASL Info:    14/Male/Behind a Computer
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 20/46/19
    Words: 217
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 110
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1263



    Description:
       Fantasy Girlfriend


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    dotsMy Herodots
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    My Girlfriend would be like this
    Every time she saw me, she would be filled with bliss
    Only me, friends, and family in her world
    That would be an awesome girl

    It would be just us
    Always filled with lust
    Hanging around a lot
    When we were bored, we always had a thought

    If one of us were to cry
    We would comfort each other with no lie
    If one of us were mad
    We would try to make each other glad

    We wouldnt care how each other would look
    We would still look pretty as someone special in a book
    We would all ways confess, even if it were a mess
    The other would tell the rest

    Never would we try to take advantage over each other
    We dont want to be like each others mother
    We might get into some fights
    Soon later it will turn out to be alright

    But one thing Im uncertain with
    Will this dream not become a myth?
    I hope this will happen someday
    Ill just be depressed and cry out my own way

    But Possibly a kiss every once in a while
    Even a hug would make me smile
    If this Story came alive
    I would be so happy us two survived...




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    ||| Comments |||
      hey kiddo! im bak again!! this is good! but some of da flow is off in some lines! but i got ur point!! im sure someday u will find da one for u! u just hav to be patient so it can be REAL special!! ok kid good job!
    ~akaila~
    | Posted on 2006-03-26 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]



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