Description: I finally finished this poem. If you are looking for bees and posies, I suggest you look elsewhere. Perhaps I will add more to it when further inspired. I hope you get the message, if you don't feel free to PM me.
I say the line between love and hate is drawn here. You hate because you loved. Howeer hate isn't love and shouldn't be used but its various causes can be seen in this piece. Great work, comment on mine sometime missed talking to ya, sorry for what i said.
I've always said that there is a fine line between love and hate, and sometimes the two intermingle. Whether this is about love, hate, or just a feeling of entrappment, one can guess.
However, the rhyme was very very good and you are very consistent in the standard of what you write. You are very talented and I have no doubt, that you have the potential of great things within you.
Submission Name: Hatred's Hostage
