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    dots Submission Name: to lifedots

    Author: bloodied_angel
    ASL Info:    15/Female/Oklahoma
    Elite Ratio:    2.63 - 79/119/44
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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       its really hard to explain what brought this on
    i know what it is but its hard to explain

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsto lifedots

    behold the magic of a moment
    forever joy is mixed with fear
    every waking moment spent
    thinking of a future

    if by gods grace i wake to see the 'morrow
    or my sins consume me in this sacred sleep

    i will witness every sunrise and remember
    the gift that was given to me

    with every sunset i will think on what
    waits for me when my last breath escapes me

    wether you go first and i follow
    or i jump first and you follow
    i know i will see you smiling at me
    when i meet nirvana

    Submitted on 2006-03-22 20:47:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was nice
    like a prayer u read before u go to bed

    "behold the magic of a moment
    forever joy is mixed with fear
    every waking moment spent
    thinking of a future"

    i realllly halfta start thinking about da future

    a che voule, non macano modi
    Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      ok first spelling mistakes CORRECT THEM.
    what is morrow&nirvana do reply to me.

    then i will tell a proper comment
    | Posted on 2006-03-23 00:00:00 | by keestu | [ Reply to This ]

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