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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/What is
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    Slumber away in the night,
    Dawn to fall through the sky.
    A day to be born, a day to live,
    For purpose to find it, to fly.

    Should the rain fall down?
    As the tears of our mother.
    So does she smile with content,
    Giving life for another.

    My god for shall I pray,
    To you that I exist.
    My purpose undefined,
    Mind that unlocks the exit.

    My life in an endless search,
    A reason for existence.
    Defined by myself in my head,
    An idea from nowhere which makes thy sense.

    Have I not yet answered,
    The question to be asked.
    Why do I live?
    My purpose so lost.




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