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    dots Submission Name: Untitled: Figure It Outdots
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    Author: Diezel20
    ASL Info:    21/M/Stone Mountain
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 10/23/24
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 207
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    dotsUntitled: Figure It Outdots
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    Responsible for so very much
    so easily bruised and abused
    it hangs out there, as if to be on some kind of string
    and it's so taken for granted and overused

    It governs all that you see romantically
    and so much of what life does to you
    it has to be nurtured, taken care of, and when it's not
    so much pain and anguish does it bring you

    It brings you your most treasured relationships
    and it decides whether they'll mean something to you or not
    it gives you the strength to say whether they'll become something
    or whether they'll just fade and rot

    it tells you what's worth persuing
    and what's not the least bit worth your time
    you use it to govern relationships, love, friendship
    and what happens over time

    whatever you choose to do with it
    is your choice and yours alone
    whether or not you use it
    it also something that you decide on your own

    because although it's there and not going anywhere
    it doesn't mean that it can't be destroyed
    so do with it what you will
    maybe it'll survive whatever you put inside of it





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      I'd say its was heart,mind,cosmic balance of your karma, but then thats just my thought on it,by the way this is an excellent write, it I think is whatever the reader might put into it,thanks for the read
    adnil
    | Posted on 2006-03-23 00:00:00 | by adnil | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this piece - seems 2 be about your soul or your spirituality or even the world in which you live.
    A lot of truths spoken here - do with "IT" what you will or not.....I have a quote on my e-mails from Emerson about appreciating the gifts your given or as quietly and quickly as you receive them - un-used & notice they simply go on there way.
    Good!
    love,peace,joy&smilez 2 share
    tif
    | Posted on 2006-03-23 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]



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