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    Author: DonKB
    ASL Info:    34/m/goergia
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 19/17/11
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Fanfic/Cutting or Mutilation
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    I think of things i can not see
    as they keep haunting me
    mindless games twisted pain
    lacking dreamless memories
    up side thurths backward lies
    as you let the words fly
    spin around leaps and bounds
    walking on a bus inbound
    mind numbing screams
    movies full of teens
    words with no meaning
    thoughts untold
    as this riddle unfolds
    does she love me
    does she not
    a tree with a knot
    begging strangers
    steeling friends
    just let it all end




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