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    dots Submission Name: The Exorcist(part 6)dots

    Author: Evil Jesture
    ASL Info:    22/m/wherever
    Elite Ratio:    3.14 - 165/201/93
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
    Total Views: 1130
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    Bytes: 585

       This is the beggining of the exorcism when they finnaly make contact.

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    dotsThe Exorcist(part 6)dots

    The room grew horrid
    As the climate grew harsh
    The child than began to speak in many tongues

    Her father and mother shuttered
    At the Absentees she has spoken
    As her face became disfigured
    To look like the devil himself

    The laughs of a thousand demons
    Filled the air from within
    The window shattered to pieces
    Placing cuts upon my face

    Blood dripped from my wounds
    To the cold floor below
    It created the word fool
    Then it felt as if the ground has opened up

    Submitted on 2006-03-23 19:55:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this one wasn't as good as the others....I think it was just the length of it maybe....I really liked the second half of this one better....this kinda filled it's purpose as to add to the total effect more so than to BE a huge part of that effect.
    *goes to next one*
    | Posted on 2006-03-24 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]

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