Land of everlasting night
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Land of everlasting night
In this land of superstition Walked by the dragons and devils The roads are guarded by crosses Watched by castles and fortresses Inhabited only by ghosts And the centuries of legends Never giving up their secrets Death roams freely in the forests Not domesticated or caged Nor tortured into submission As shadows stretch across the land The full moon spills into the sky Magic runs rampant in the dark Bringing the sweet release of change Transformation to a new shape Immortality comes creeping Out from the grave and the dead walk In the stillness of eternity The night will be everlasting |
Submitted on 2006-03-23 21:39:52 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| This was simply awesome! The strong describing words you used, made it all so real to actually image while reading. No long comment, just wanted to drop by and let you know I like you’re style and hope to see some more in the future Keep well Lee | Posted on 2006-03-28 00:00:00 | by Lee | [ Reply to This ] | Alright, well I wasn't going to leave a comment, because to put it simply - I don't see anything wrong with it. I didn't think posting anything would really be worth it, being as I don't have any comments that will 'improve' anything about this. I love it as is. It's truly unique. I do think that it could be a part of something bigger though. It describes the setting of what could be quite the impressive write (story). I absolutely loved this line : | The full moon spills into the sky The way you expressed it as the moon 'spilling' into the sky was beautiful. It painted a great picture in my mind - one I hope will not leave any time soon. I can definatley learn something from your style, and your choice in words... I loved it. | Posted on 2006-03-24 00:00:00 | by stefhy | [ Reply to This ] | |
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