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    Author: muhammed
    ASL Info:    23/male/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 87/124/111
    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 246
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1295



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    I'm a poet ; I'm not?!
    no,I get to be ,
    for all the things,
    that I have inside of me...
    I'm a poet but
    there are so many better than me,
    but, but it's not an illusion
    no it's not a reverie
    I'm not half talented
    but, O, bitter they are better,
    they are so much better then me,

    NO I'm going to be,
    the greatest poet of all time,
    I write deep from the heart with great rhyme,
    I just can't be no one,
    I just can't die unknown
    I belong there in the horizons;where the sun,
    I'm not going to end a name written in a piece of stone,
    I'm ganna be stroger then space and langoush,

    I'm a poet, I'm a poet ,I'm a poet
    can't you hear,and I'm not gone quit,
    I'm gone live for it ,
    and for it I will die...

    die!, said I ?
    Die; the same fate that all well beings end,
    strange how I become so quiet
    when I'm thinking of death,
    this life is nights above night,
    and waves and waves descend

    Oh,god, forgive me for all that screams
    just let me die before my dreams,




    Submitted on 2006-03-24 07:52:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      As an idea it's really deep !...U need some attention ... u need to be heard... to be seen... to be felt...
    N who doesn't want all this !!!
    but when it comes to th writtings... so many mistakes.. typo i guess... not that serious thing... but maybe you should revise it !!!
    Just a suggestion ...
    | Posted on 2007-11-23 00:00:00 | by Dying Young | [ Reply to This ]
      for not being a poet ur a good poet! the last line is my favorite
    "Oh ...god forgive me for all that screams
    just let me die before my dreams
    I really like that
    | Posted on 2006-03-24 00:00:00 | by emb_er77 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow....i hear you
    i felt your need to be heard and recognised and for others to just know your soul , to see someone who feels and expresses it through words
    lotasaluv
    nadine
    | Posted on 2006-03-24 00:00:00 | by lostspirit | [ Reply to This ]



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