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    dots Submission Name: The Sweetest Sugardots
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    Author: KelseyJo
    ASL Info:    14/F/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 15/13/12
    Words: 219
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsThe Sweetest Sugardots
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    Sugar is so addicting,
    it's sweetness and taste.
    Reminds me of you,
    but, oh, what a waste.
    Too bad you're not different,
    or at least nice.
    Your eyes were meant to tempt,
    your body entice.
    But something went wrong,
    and you're hands are cold.
    You're black and silent,
    but you're mouth never told.
    I know now,
    but you're like a drug.
    I keep coming back,
    and in my skin your cold fingers dug.
    You're sucking the life out of me,
    but I can't let go.
    The sugar's just too sweet,
    even though I know.
    You just smile,
    but it's warm is gone.
    I shiver with lust and fear,
    but it is not done.
    When we're together,
    I close my eyes and pretend.
    Too bad you're not really like sugar,
    or that my heart won't mend.
    I think you've scarred me for life,
    with your eyes and hands.
    No matter how far I go I can't escape,
    not in all the lands.
    You remind me of a leech,
    sucking and never taking a breath.
    But I stay in your arms,
    knowing but not caring of my nearing death.
    Because sugar is so addicting,
    and I taste it when I'm near you.
    You never let go,
    and pushing you away is something I can't do.







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