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    dots Submission Name: Vermilion Romancedots
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    Author: Lilithe_Aislin
    ASL Info:    20/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    5.19 - 79/67/15
    Words: 344
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 224
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 2200



    Description:
       OK, This one is a little strange, but it's just straightforward, uncensored emotion. This is how I feel, mixed up inside. I guess that's why this seems mixed up. lol (^_^)


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    dotsVermilion Romancedots
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    Striding beside you beneath blinding lights
    Over worn tiles that still reflect it's gleam
    Walls plastered with the faces of the dead
    With us not as lucky to join them underground

    "Blood will have blood" the pictures whisper
    But you urge me to pay no mind
    Sustained in belief I reach for your hand
    So close yet so far away

    "I love you like I love the night
    And from that I cannot hide."
    Confusion is painted on your solemn face
    Wishing you would understand, I turn away

    Your touch on my arm send shivers up my spine
    Turning to match your solid, loving gaze
    I see the world in your brilliant blue eyes
    Falling for your illusions again

    Just as I always have, I will fall and fall again
    So long as your there to catch me
    Never will I need my tattered wings to fly
    Nor my broken heart to love again

    "Join me in death"
    Your liquid smooth voice makes me quiver inside
    A rapid beating in my chest quickens
    I am here with you, as I have always been

    Ravenous creatures we are
    Hiding from the light of day
    Dying inside, we've wept so long
    Never able to wash the blood from our hands

    Though we torture each other
    With words, with actions, with sweet nothings
    And dream at nights of worlds that never were
    The love is there, but the mind's not at ease

    Though it's dangerous and possibly misplaced
    I trust you with my heart's ashes
    All the love I have to give
    My faded Metallic blood is yours to keep

    There are ups and downs, and sides at times
    With you I've been through each one
    Drastic highs and tragic falls
    But remember, sometimes the fall kills you

    Nonetheless, I will stay in this darkness with you
    As long as my soulless body will remain and more
    This moment locked in these hallowed halls
    Feeding on sweet memories we never had
    These memories that kill...




    Submitted on 2006-03-24 18:48:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aww i love you too, I know things are confusing right now between us but after a little while it will all make sense. Just let me take care of it.

    Your poem was awsome. I love way I seem to personnify everything. Verry cool!!

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    | Posted on 2006-03-28 00:00:00 | by The_Forsaken1 | [ Reply to This ]



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