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    dots Submission Name: Mother's Crooked Smiledots
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    Author: xaos
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 34/54/49
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 149
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsMother's Crooked Smiledots
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    Cellophane pearls
    Wrap the sidewalk
    Tall in fallen worlds.
    Concrete gasps
    Grip at a swinging
    Pendulums pass.

    The sands of us
    Bound by blood.
    Each droplet expired
    To become one
    Of piece in attire.

    The earth draped
    In our brittle fingers;
    Blistering gaze
    Kisses the king's
    Last clean palm,
    Upon its shattering.

    Our masterpiece,
    Dropped to the sky.
    Fallen from the eye
    Of Satan to street.

    The earth cries
    From the bowels
    Of porcelain smiles.
    As the tears dry;
    Dust is swallowed
    Upon a devils
    Settlement signed.

    Forever higher
    Falls evolution.
    Confusion tires
    Yet, burden of cracks
    Surpass solution.

    And here we stand:
    We're knee deep
    In a gift for land.
    Given to Mother,
    Yet not even she
    Can be its lover.

    As thin ice breaks,
    Becomes puddle;
    we stand in the way:
    Ankle deep...
    We're dammed it seems.

    Troubles born;
    Bastard by fearing
    Fathers scorned.
    The lines are drawn;
    Mother's crooked smiles
    wild ends nearing
    Every last dawn,
    Eclipsing the sun.

    Mans greatest mistake.
    Wrapped the earth
    Within selfish pace.
    Taped Mother's mouth;
    Then crossed over
    The bridge into rain.

    Spared wet feet
    By exchanging,
    damp theory.
    Blind minds race
    For perspective;
    The bats fold
    Their ears in.
    And here sings
    the ignorant ode
    to reversed thinking.

    Now the selfish
    Walk their cracks...
    Eyes: black circles
    Mark a Devils pact,
    As they circle
    The cracks exhale;
    Gasping again...
    But then to Inhale.




    Submitted on 2006-03-24 19:55:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      NICELY written & very, very long! Anyways nicely written and expressed I like the 4th & 5th stanza! Keep up the excellent work, peace & stay safe...
    | Posted on 2006-03-25 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
      wow..i thought this piece was great..the flow was unique and very good..i thought your emotion and point across spilled flawlessly within every word.

    "And here we stand:
    We're knee deep
    In a gift for land.
    Given to Mother,
    Yet not even she
    Can be its lover."

    I LOVE these lines to DEATH!..they just popped out at me, this stanza was by far, to me, the best of them all!..anyhows i truly did enjoy this piece..keep up the great work!!
    --Lucy--
    | Posted on 2006-03-24 00:00:00 | by rainbowXrazors | [ Reply to This ]



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