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    dots Submission Name: Dont Want To Be Coydots
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    Author: Robert Neville
    ASL Info:    16/m/London
    Elite Ratio:    0.45 - 10/187/221
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 181
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1030



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    dotsDont Want To Be Coydots
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    I don't want to be coy,
    But to say what I'm about to do
    Would not be cool.
    Let's just leave it at that.
    If the world is black, it's black,
    Whether you complain
    Or collaborate by silence.
    Even if people liked me,
    I wouldn't like them.
    I would just have to watch them
    Being mean to people
    And not say anything.
    Because to say anything
    Would not be cool.
    Let's just leave it at that.
    You're not going to change the world,
    Whether you complain
    Or collaborate by silence.
    I travel often to the frozen heart of the world,
    Inland to that Antarctic, rock-strewn desert
    With a few dozen warm-blooded penguins wandering around
    Lost, dazed, dejected.
    That's the way things are deep down under.
    I'm never going to change things,
    Whether I complain
    Or collaborate by silence.
    Let's just leave it at that.




    Submitted on 2006-03-25 08:34:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I LOVE THIS PIECE
    I'm listening to a song by Radu sarbu
    and the words go perfect with the beat
    you should think of turning this piece into a song if you havent already
    But the poem by itself is great the words
    are sarcastic like, spunky
    i love it :)
    Audrey
    | Posted on 2006-03-25 00:00:00 | by nightxassassin | [ Reply to This ]



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