I feel this way each day, I look for the best in everything at least most the time. I enjoy the garden, and would like to pick the frit once again, but the snake is guarding the gate and won't let me in. Hey, that's good, I'll add that line to a new poem I write, when I get in the mood again, thanks for the little inspiration again. I need my muse back, where is she? :-) Good writing.
It was quick, which in this case is a good thing. I love precise poetry that pulls you in and gives you a thought but does not hold you captive. The message in your poem is a thought provoking one. If you stay in one place too long or so something too often, its familiarity makes it grey. Loved it.
Very nice. I especially love the first line, it really pulled me into the write. This really was something to remember... the idea that we never left Eden, is unusual if not a great concept. What I really loved about this was that it made me think, wonderfully written... I loved it! I'd give this poem a 9.5 out of 10, spread your words like fire.
My Friend This is a deep write that really made me think Yes to live a Good Life one needs a positive mindset But I find it hard to think that Paradise is an attitude Paradise is everywher It is an actual place it is here it is everywhere In order to FIND true Paradise on Earth we need a good attitude that I agree with but Paradise in General is a Gift from the Good Lord for us all to enjoy God Bless Ron