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    dots Submission Name: What if . . ?dots
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    Author: T.O.S.R.
    ASL Info:    16/F/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 53/53/15
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/
    Total Views: 113
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1482



    Description:
       Again, just some random thoughts... Not put together very well, but it's just a spur of the moment type thing. I'm too worried about what this poem is about to figure out a good 'rythm' or 'form'... -_-


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    dotsWhat if . . ?dots
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    Ingnorance and bliss
    To fill a young life to the brim.
    A cup soon to be empty
    Shattered with a single statement.

    "What if you're pregnant?"

    The word starts a chill
    at the bottom of my spine.
    One that runs through every limb
    and every nerve.

    Try to disconnect
    Try to let it all float downstream
    Forget the word
    Forget the thought

    "What if you really are?"

    I can't lose the thought
    Can't forget the worry...
    Can't take back the words
    and can't turn back the clock.

    Two little hands with 10 tiny fingers.
    Miniature feet to kick and squirm.
    9 months of waiting to see
    A smile that's like no other.

    "What if I am..?"

    What about highschool?
    College? Marriage? A job?
    Who will clean the dirty diapers,
    while I try to make something out of the life I threw away?

    But I didn't throw it away...
    Even through all the rollercoaster feelings,
    through all the "what a mistake"s...
    I'm in love already.

    "Bring it on"

    That's all I have to say.
    I won't let you bring me down,
    Because I'm stronger than that,
    And I'll do what I have to.

    <3




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    ||| Comments |||
      This is really outstanding
    You are already showing the heart and Love a mother needs to give to her child
    I am positive you will make a great parent
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Outstanding. You expressed a full range of emotions and arrived at a selfless solution. Strength and courage is what I felt from this piece.
    | Posted on 2006-03-26 00:00:00 | by nsc | [ Reply to This ]



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