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    dots Submission Name: Demon Armydots

    Author: Areinaka
    ASL Info:    20, F, Oregon, USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 130/114/29
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 847
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       Areinaka's my alter-ego, and she is a very odd character. I love this poem. I also love comments. :P

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    dotsDemon Armydots

    Demons revealing their true sides,
    Becoming like the rough ocean tides.
    Marching across the ground like nothing before.
    Leaving barren ground as they march on to war.
    Blades sharpened, screaming in horrible rage.
    Being freshly released, they burst from their cage.
    Death rides ahead of them.
    Singing its haunting requiem.
    Ebony skies fall behind.
    Demons destroy whatever their claws can find.
    Chaos surrounds them, berserking their thoughts.
    These monstrous demons, so hatefully they fought.
    Demolishing kingdoms and miniscule towns.
    Stealing everything, even kings' crowns.
    Marching back to their master.
    Master urges them on, demon feet run faster.
    They arrive at her palace.
    Drinking from her sacred chalice.
    Restoring their strength, they head out again.
    Areinaka screams at them, "Bring me back some gin!"

    Submitted on 2006-03-26 21:12:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ferocious and picturesque. This piece is awesome and deserves recognition in he fullest. Brilliant rythm, rhyme, expression and theme idea. Great style too. A fave.
    | Posted on 2006-11-15 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]

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