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    dots Submission Name: I Hated You...Oncedots
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    Author: forevertorn
    ASL Info:    16.f.california
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 21/30/19
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 186
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       For the reality of the situation, see my latest journal titled " *sigh* "


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    dotsI Hated You...Oncedots
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    I hated you...once
    I couldn't stand to hear your voice.
    I couldn't take your irrisponsibility;
    Your lies.
    I couldn't take the way you would blame all your problems on it.
    I couldn't stand the way you'd blame all your mistakes on it.

    I hated it...but you stopped
    I saw you in the grocery store
    It was akward but I enjoyed that visit,
    you came back.
    and the phone call afterward;
    I didn't want to hang up the phone.
    After he left, I wanted to call you back.

    I hated you...once
    but now,
    I honestly don't know.
    You shouldn't have come back...

    ...please don't ever leave again.





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      Okay, this is a bit random, but I understand where you're coming from. I feel this way sometimes, people can be so confusing. And like they say, there is a verrrrrry thin line between love and hate. All I can say is be ever so careful... My favorite lines:

    I hated you...once
    but now,
    I honestly don't know.
    You shouldn't have come back...

    ...please don't ever leave again.
    | Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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