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    dots Submission Name: Hehe...dots
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    Author: Areinaka
    ASL Info:    20, F, Oregon, USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 130/114/29
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 730
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Hehe. All hail the cuteness of evil. Not really.


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    dotsHehe...dots
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    Deadly hatred surrounds me,
    Boiling all my blood.
    My sanity is slipping,
    Leaving me in a flood.
    My entire body shaking,
    They just make it worse.
    Next time you see me,
    I shall be in a hearse.
    Dreading Life,
    Wanting Death.
    Saying "Go to Hell."
    With my very last breath.




    Submitted on 2006-03-26 21:14:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      mmm...
    didnt see that one coming at all...
    your title kind of pointed to something happy and the piece is anything but happy.
    i got ambushed!!!
    haha...
    straight to the point and very nice(except for that ambushed feeling i had).
    i guess everyone had that feeling before so i can relate to it.

    sorry...
    random question.
    do we still use hearse?
    | Posted on 2007-04-12 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ]
      Reminds me of me last year. The whole, wanting to die and say "[censored] you" to the world. Yeah, that was me freshman year.

    THings will get better though, I promise. You just have to work through things you know? Alot of times, it takes just being able to see not only the negative things in life, but the positive things too.

    For me, it took a boyfriend (psh how lame lol) but really, he was drugged up all the time and suicidal. I realized I didn't want to be like him. And i just kinda saw my life for what it is. not what it isnt.
    | Posted on 2006-03-26 00:00:00 | by forevertorn | [ Reply to This ]


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