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Submission Name: Jack Ass dots

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Author:	DontSaveMySoul
ASL Info:	20/m/cali
Elite Ratio:	3.84 - 194/184/42
Words:	80

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	218
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He offends often on mulitple plains
If your faith does not suit him
He will make you feel a fool
If your politics do not suit him
He will tell you you're inferior
If your life style doesn't suit him
He will point out hypocricies
If your job doesn't suit him
He will call you incompitent
If your poetry doesn't suit him
He will let you know about it

He is rather proud to say
He is just me

Submitted on 2006-03-27 00:41:58 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It sounds like a typical Paul poem...I admire the belife that you are your own God you levay loving f uck. But anyways all in all, this is a great write...I really like the way you wrote it as far as going if you don't like something than you will let that person know without any bull[censored], and if politics doesn't suit you, youll make people feel inferior, I like it, because mostly it's all you, and just you, you don't give a flying f uck about what the hell people think about you, and that's something that I have always admired about you Paul, I don't know if it's even how we got to know eachother so quickly, because like you, I don't care to much what people think about me, rather they hate me or like me, I really just can get along with either...Otherwise...Keep up the writing, I know none of these poser poets comment on any of peoples [censored], but that's there bad...They should honestly stop writing, because 80% of these people on this site, don't know how to write [censored]...Anyhow...See ya later...
| Posted on 2006-10-21 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]
  For some reason, I figured it was about you.
I like the way you wrote this, and I really love the honesty and the fact that you're proud of the way you are. You should be.

Hmm... I was going to say that doesn't make you a jackass, but people can be jackasses on so many different levels... so maybe it does, but there's nothing wrong with that. If you can't be yourself, then who CAN you be? *insert suspicious and zorro-like face here*

Sorry this comment isn't very good. I'm a bit unstable from lack of sleep. I just thought I might as well tell you I enjoyed this

Wonderfully done
-nikkki
| Posted on 2006-10-05 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice work. Nice flow. I have to disagree Audrey here. You're not being critical of yourself at all, simply explaining why others see you as a "Jack Ass"

All in all, a soild write. Keep it up.
| Posted on 2006-04-25 00:00:00 | by Vampirism | [ Reply to This ]
  Very critical of yourself, are you?
I can see thats the other side of you, and people. The judgmental side. I was reading, in the beggining, I thought it was going to be another one of those 'angry at dad' poems, but it wasnt.
Audrey
| Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by nightxassassin | [ Reply to This ]

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