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    dots Submission Name: Shall you not come truedots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 441
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 766
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       This is my story of my life on how it was. That how I desperately wait for my Maya to come true.


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    dotsShall you not come truedots
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    Love in the air is what just happens,
    when ones Maya comes into being.
    Shall not end the realms of life,
    for wait till eternity shall so it seem.

    Happens so happens in my life that ends,
    happiness I find at the end of the line.
    Meet shall I not the Maya of my dreams,
    so deep is the cut of love to sublime.

    Single as I stood as an island in the sea,
    cry did I cry forever to see.
    May life not live to end for her;
    life itself was dark to believe.

    Started so it did the singleness in the mind,
    made up did the trees in the forest of lives.
    Alone did I walk in this undying venture,
    for never did I find the teak in the skies.

    Share did I so with all that around me
    live did I so with the hope of hopes.
    Cry did I weep till tears no more,
    for the pain in my heart endless of slopes.

    Light did a friend a match in the dark,
    content was I with such a lonely heart.
    Brave was I to fly by beside,
    a friend to guide with the pin of a dart.

    So did the pain endure when he went,
    live for nothing for so it seemed.
    Maya oh Maya where are you,
    Search did I then for a candle to be redeemed.

    Start my love a woman of purity,
    find did I so in my walk unknown.
    Leave did she with silence as golden,
    my heart to be crushed to bits to thorns.

    New to find in the world of wonders,
    people of my place people of my life.
    Live did I live for my Maya to be;
    hearty was the welcome to the same path to the knife.

    Love was all that I needed from the first;
    from the woman I seek the girl of my dreams.
    Never did I cry to show my pain,
    while living in heaven in my hell it feels.

    Sad to say my heart always cries,
    for the difference she would make my life so blue,
    End shall it with her love unknown,
    my Maya and me for never to come true.

    To my love my Maya
    My life is always for you waiting forever

    A friend is someone whom you die for
    Love is something you live for
    You are my love my dream my Maya......

    - Keestu




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