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    dots Submission Name: fight did the legenddots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
    Total Views: 1181
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 848



    Description:
       This is about Michael Jackson and his life long fight for freedom from himself and the people around him whom he loves most.


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    Blessed with a gift a voice unknown
    sweet as an angel did rise the one
    made history in life with his moves and himself
    never as such, did a person like someone.

    Dangerous was the game of life and death
    jealousy the limit of the wall of fame
    made this frame up by a devil a curse
    even Satan to be good than this menace insane.

    Walk did he in the moon in the skies
    bad was he in a good sense to abide
    made was he among five of the angels
    the thriller himself the man inside.

    Kind so was his dark childhood
    endless fame of work never to stop
    sorrow that a person should suffer such pain
    shall all the hearts love the king of pop.

    ---- A kings respect for a king the great
    MICHAEL JACKSON




    Submitted on 2006-03-27 03:15:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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