As A Loner by Roberto Santos

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Submission Name: As A Loner dots

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Author:	Roberto Santos
ASL Info:	18/Male/India
Elite Ratio:	2.96 - 118/159/75
Words:	112

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	967
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As A Loner dots

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I am alone once again
It is a feeling I am used to
It no longer gives me pain
Though happy moments are few.

Loneliness is a good friend
It visits me very often
Although when it departs
The day does seem to brighten.

It is a good thing
For one to be lonely
Though it doesn’t give joy
One can exist peacefully.

Many people condemn this feeling
Indeed it is much maligned
But they don’t know the peace
One can in loneliness find.

It is good to be solitary
In mind and in spirit
With loneliness you can live life
In the manner you see fit.

Submitted on 2006-03-27 04:12:02 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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hey u!! they rhyming here was perfect!! this seemed very thought out and personal!! its beautifull! i woudnt change a thing!its a fav!
~akaila~
| Posted on 2006-04-08 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
Beautifully written! I love your rhyming stanza's, how they are not every sentence, but only the second and last! And the very essence of the poem is so sincere that I understand you totally! I think it maybe something only those that are there can feel, and I have been there where you are now/were. Wonderful job!
Cheers,
~Persephone~
| Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by Persephone | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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