Description: This poem is very short. If I can think of someting I might try to make it longer.
now on the form of this poem, it fits the title so if you read it normally it will sound cool but won't make much sense. It shouldn't be that hard to read. Let me know what you think.
Between the lines -------------------------------------------
In between everything
If only
There is a hidden message
We looked
Which is easily over looked
Between
So we go on wondering
What was being said
Why things don’t make sense
Thi is a really clever write You show that people sometimes base their opinion on the first impression This can never be a good thing One needs to hear and learn from a person before they make an evaluation of how true that person Again Clever Write Well Worded I enjoyed reading this God Bless Ron
lol, awesome! i love the idea. i wouldn't change a thing. it's not at all too short either. i would leave it just the way it is: short and sweet and complete. very well done!
Submission Name: Between the lines
