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Time To Study


Author: Tom110989
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I wrote this while I was supposed to study for my exams.
Try studying for your exams when this one person keeps entering your thoughts ...
But I did ok on my exams I guess.
Anyway, I don't know if she's ever going to read this, or if she knows that this one is for her ...
Just tell me what you think.
Tom


Time To Study



Time To Study

Physics ...
Newton said
That everything is being pulled to the earth
then why do I feel like I can fly ?

I must concentrate
I can't afford myself to think about you now
To miss you ...
No I can't think about you right now

History ...
I was taught
History repeats itself
Will I make the same mistake again ?

I must concentrate
I can't afford myself to think about you now
To miss you ...
No I can't think about you right now

Biology ...
Just great ...
Could it be ?
Butterfly's everywhere !

I must concentrate
I can't afford myself to think about you now
To miss you ...
No I can't think about you right now

Maths ...
We all know
One and one is two
That includes me and you ...

I must concentrate
I can't afford myself to think about you now
To miss you ...
No I can't think about you right now




Submitted on 2006-03-27 11:09:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Tom-
This is one of my favorites of yours! Its a cool concept and I like the reptition. One picky suggestion/correction- I think that you may mean "math" not "maths". just an gramatical nusiance.

I hope that she knows you are something special. I'm attempting to study tonight too. History- EWWW. Anyway, I hope that she doesn't distract you too much my boy! Concentrate Tom- Don't let your attention slip. good, good- AH- You just thought of her didn't you?! Back to studying, slacker! X)

I liked this a lot Tom- Its going on my faves
SASHA LYNN
| Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by Sasha Lynn | [ Reply to This ]
  Reminds me of someone who is so in love they really can'y concentrate on anything else. I thought this piece was fun cause your trying to avoid a thought, but really can't. I have had this happen to me to many times, unfortunately i don't usually do to well on the exams if this happens. Anyways.... this was a different type of love poem at a different approach that i have not seen yet, original, thanks for the write, ciao for now, Amber
| Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by amber_in_wyomin | [ Reply to This ]
  This is great. I don't like to share my poetry with anyone I know either, even If I am talking about that person in the poem. I really enjoyed the way you conveyed your message about how certain things such as crushes can distract someone from the necessary studying.

I also found something very interesting in this. I felt a need to question the international educational systems after reading this. The way a pupil performs exams is based on his/her mood before the paper and not necessarily the students intelligence.

Your format, concept and originality is why I am chosing this as a favourite of mine.

Well done, Tom


Abbas
| Posted on 2006-07-13 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]


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