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BOUNCYBALLS


Author: darkness
ASL Info:    19/F/my own world
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Words: 105
Class/Type: Rant /Them
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something i rote to try to get over my fear of bouncyballs....

theyv been haunting me since kindegarden




BOUNCYBALLS



mann bouncyballs r scaryyy
the one thing that i fear
bullets just bounce off em
so much for da glock
my super sharp pocket knife
wont cut through em either
not even the cute lil chainsawww
can saw thru em
bouncyballs are evil
i couldnt sleep last night
for fear they mite jump in
from the outside window
The Big Pink One is hiding behind the couch
watching me
as it plans its next move
or is it a coy
for the bouncyball army
they are worse then trolls
i swear

THOSE damn bouncyballs
are out to get me...




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  I love it. I came across this randomly and just had to say that upon reading it. It's just such a completely random and origional subject that's crazy funny. lol
| Posted on 2006-10-28 00:00:00 | by nomad knight | [ Reply to This ]
  my god. this was the weirdest poem i have ever read. wow.


why did you choose bouncy balls? Were you drunk or high? just asking. hehe

funny though.

-Haze
| Posted on 2006-05-31 00:00:00 | by WTF Zombies | [ Reply to This ]
  How random, yet interesting. Why were you scared of bouncy balls :S

Any way, this is very unique and since poetry is an expression of emotion, I will not critisize this anymore but praise.

Now that I read it again, it is kind of funny

Good Job

Keep it original

Abbas
| Posted on 2006-04-01 00:00:00 | by abuzzbuzz92 | [ Reply to This ]
  that is the boringist poem ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i really mean it.
[censored]
i cant believe you are afraid of bouncyballs
thats stupid

Uthmaan












































| Posted on 2006-03-30 00:00:00 | by Uthmaan | [ Reply to This ]
  hahaha. this write made me fall out laughing. the topic is just original and funny. great write.
-brandon
| Posted on 2006-03-28 00:00:00 | by Leon Kennedy | [ Reply to This ]
  lol, this is excellent...very refreshing from most normal morose bs. tho, one thing to fix is the way you emphasis...instead fo repeating the last letter a bunch of times, repeat the vowels, cuz that's when u hold notes...and seriously, fire takes care of bouncyballs...just like it takes care of zombies ^_^

Storm
| Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by OrionsStorm | [ Reply to This ]
  I am the king of bouncyballs. Renounce your fear and join me!

BOUNCE!

You cannot destroy me. I have magic bouncing powers and a magic bouncing army. A few of my bouncyballs are bouncing land mines!

BOUNCE!

Your poem has led me to you. Now, come! Do not fear us any longer. Join us! You know you want to....

you are getting very sleepy....

blargh blargh honk honk

BOUNCE!
| Posted on 2006-06-07 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
  bouncy balls? well i dont know whaty kind of knife you were using. i used a blunt one and disected quite a few. have you tried burning.

its ok though. i understand the rfear of the pink one. i am the only girl in my yyear level that hates pink.

dont feel too out of place. my firned is terrified of cotton wool, and to clarify, i am not making fun of you.
| Posted on 2006-07-05 00:00:00 | by eowyn | [ Reply to This ]
  Err yeah this was a little crazy but then i;ve known people who have had a genuine fear of telephones and grass so not too peculiar lol.
Have you seen that advert with all the bouncy balls going down the road?? you should make yourself watch it and then you may be cured cos they bounce right into the screen.
Try it
John
| Posted on 2006-06-22 00:00:00 | by hammyj | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey, don't worry. When I was small, I used to have nightmares with bouncyballs in them. Only, it was in my grandparent's basement, and in this black and white SCARY way. Oh, and the bouncyballs were sometimes metallic, which hurt :(
| Posted on 2006-06-24 00:00:00 | by Outlaw | [ Reply to This ]
  hi hi hi hi hbi
i love bouncy balls
| Posted on 2006-06-15 00:00:00 | by me_emo | [ Reply to This ]
  haha this was soo funny....definatly original and kinda oddly ammusing. but out of curiousity why bouncy balls? lots of things cannot be destroyed....what about air? you can't get rid of that.
peace
| Posted on 2006-03-31 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]


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