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    dots Submission Name: Choclate Milkdots
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    Author: Uthmaan
    ASL Info:    11/M/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    1.83 - 44/33/7
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 928
    Average Vote:    2.3333
    Bytes: 212



    Description:
       My love for Choclate Milk


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    dotsChoclate Milkdots
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    Choclate Milk, Choclate Milk,
    In the sea
    Choclate Milk, Choclate Milk,
    In in bee
    Choclate Milk, Choclate Milk,
    In the feet
    Choclate Milk, Choclate Milk,
    In the pee




    Submitted on 2006-03-27 16:42:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hahaha... utty u are hilarious. I </3 you so much! this was so funny

    peace

    Unperfect
    | Posted on 2006-05-20 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ]
      Ryte...this is kindda funny.
    But. what is this about actually?
    I can't ged u.
    | Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by D-Ink | [ Reply to This ]
      this is funny as [censored] lil kid but i am so not your sister so i agreee with MmR
    well hmmm....i'm just ...well....at a loss for words...so i think what i'mma do is slowly back away and exit quietly out the door
    lol no offense
    | Posted on 2006-04-08 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      dis poem rawkssss
    | Posted on 2006-07-01 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      didnt like it.. it was funny, but it was the kind of funny that isnt really funny but funny/weird because it is so random...
    | Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      Chocolate dude, Chocolate...geesh...this is how i know you're a guy without having to look...can't even spell his love's name properly.

    well hmmm....i'm just ...well....at a loss for words...so i think what i'mma do is slowly back away and exit quietly out the door
    | Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by MmR | [ Reply to This ]
      yo snooty these lyrics made me laugh
    funie as hellz man
    even tho u was hell serious when u rote dis


    R.I.P
    Queen Darknesssss of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      yuck
    | Posted on 2006-06-30 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      The lines were funny, and yet somehow disturbing. I don't know. It was unique, and now I know that you really love chocolate, but still.... *starts to sneaky ever so slowly towards the door*
    Cheers,
    ~Persephone~
    | Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by Persephone | [ Reply to This ]
      dude this is disgusting man i can not stand this poem
    | Posted on 2006-06-30 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this one its a favorite for me....
    | Posted on 2006-06-17 00:00:00 | by urbanguttah | [ Reply to This ]
      u r a silly boy.
    u r a silly boy.
    u suck.
    ur poetry or whatever u call it sucks.
    leave me the hell alone.
    | Posted on 2006-06-13 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      lol.just plain funny.a good write.

    Kepp 'em coming- Jenn
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by bbcherry | [ Reply to This ]


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