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    Author: ladyngold
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 585/520/99
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       

    This poem is just about two
    bottles of perfume displayed
    on my vanity stand.


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    Serene beautiful angelic pair
    Hold in tiny smooth fingers
    Silent harps made of ivory
    Flocked in robes of crystal
    Identical winged vessels
    Filled with heavenly scent.










    Submitted on 2006-03-27 16:49:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is pure Ladyngold and I'm glad to see you posting again - beauty can be found in anything and just as those vessels contain a pleasing scent that makes us more pleasing and beautiful so are you a vessel and your words as that scent!
    love,peace,joy&smilez 2 share
    tif
    | Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      This could very well describe a set of book ends or statues at a monument. You did a great job of turning something inanimate into a living thing with very few words. Well done!
    | Posted on 2006-03-28 00:00:00 | by The Gadfly | [ Reply to This ]
      Cheryl
    Very Well Written
    You easily gave Human Life to those two perfume bottles
    This write left me with wanting to know more
    I really like this
    great Job!!!!
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      you've brought those perfume bottles to life, Cheryl. i can see them clear as day.. i'm curious to know the scent... what is it?

    very nice.

    peace,
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Hee-hee! Neat Cheryl!
    Kind of haiku (bless u) ish in the ways the lines read. They hold a lot of description yet still let the readers mindful imagination wander. Very good writing on that front.
    Nice stuff maynard.
    | Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Cheryl, you're always really good at describing the internal qualities of everyday items.

    I see you're not wasting words, still...lol

    Very nice, a lovely little picture

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]



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