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    dots Submission Name: royalty (removed verse)dots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 552
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 648



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       I was going to put this on a song called royalty...but I didn't think it was good enough...so I took it off...and now I"m gonna post it and see what you all think...


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    dotsroyalty (removed verse)dots
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    hey bitch, you know my name/
    sit back and get prepared as I take my aim/
    buckle you belt, which is attached to the seat
    royalty, so clear, what it is when I speak/
    what's mines is mines/
    and I'ma take what's yours/
    we sold many crymes/
    and got your foot in the door/
    don't try to shut us out, you know that it not/
    happening butsing through pointing guns like cops/
    kings own the crown/
    AK, putting it down/
    infact the kings own you/
    But to know this there is few/
    under the underground/
    royalty, we rock the crown/




    Submitted on 2006-03-27 17:27:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this one wasn't that good either. u write a lotta gangsta rap and ur usually not that convincing when u do it. well at least u don't have a lot of flava when u do it. keep trying man. u'll get ur style down
    | Posted on 2006-04-01 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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