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    dots Submission Name: The Stanza of a Hurting Heartdots
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    Author: Stygian
    ASL Info:    16/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 61/75/37
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
    Total Views: 161
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 224



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       I don't know, just how I feel just about everyday. Although I usually feel hatred and anger more than sorrow.


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    dotsThe Stanza of a Hurting Heartdots
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    Do you know how it feels to be hated,
    teased, and underestimated?
    I'm outcasted like shadows on the wall...
    I go home in sorrow
    Just to dread tomorrow
    And wonder what started it all...




    Submitted on 2006-03-27 17:54:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I will admit i have been there before and i somewhat still am so i can definately relate. This was a good piece, concise yet thought provoking a truly good write.

    good Job,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-03-28 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      this was so..sad...i almost started to cry, because i could relate a lot....this purty explains how i am everyday..whoopie!..lol..i truly loved this poem, the last line was my favorite though..cuz i also do tend to wonder what began the downward spiral of my life and why i'm hated...no answers ..just questions..anyhows keep up the great work!!
    --Lucy--
    | Posted on 2006-03-27 00:00:00 | by rainbowXrazors | [ Reply to This ]



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