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    dots Submission Name: sugar pillsdots
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    Author: ghostladynessa
    ASL Info:    15/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 8/4/6
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 122
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 509



    Description:
       I am aware that this poem is slightly choppy, however when i was writing it i felt disconnected from the world..so i decided not to change it. It is a reflection of the way my brain was working at the time....


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    dotssugar pillsdots
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    falling from the surface
    and sugar pills are not sweet
    enough of my lies and the cold blood in my veins
    it spills and stains the floor
    please, help me see my perfect hate, myself.
    and my lips frozen blue,as evil runs from my, mind is throbbing from the pain i inflict on others as the rain
    runs down my face, drips off my eyelashes to the frozen
    death of my decaying soul, and i
    cant seem to find myself
    she ran from me, long ago.





    Submitted on 2006-03-27 22:53:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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