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    dots Submission Name: Someonedots
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    Author: EsCaPisT
    ASL Info:    17,Female,Singapore
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 42/38/38
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 618
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    Bytes: 729



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    Someone falls down the grace
    As she defends her love
    Someone dies out her feelings
    And her heart stops loving
    Someone tries to break down
    And he walks away with nothing
    Weighing down his heart
    Someone loses his emotions
    When he's broken-hearted for good
    Just look around..
    There's so many different people....
    Someone's missing his lover
    Someone's hugging the broken
    Someone's kissing her goodbye
    Someone's leaving the blonde girl
    Someone's falling down the stairs
    Someone's saying the final words
    Someone's leaving my life
    But i want him to stay there......




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