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    dots Submission Name: what it truly isdots
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    Author: ariadne
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 99/85/26
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       few people really understand what it is to do something. these are just images and scenarios I have connected with some of these.


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    dotswhat it truly isdots
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    an older soul
    the broken trust
    the knowledge of
    what it is to lust

    the ageless song
    forgotten things
    familiar riff
    what it is to sing

    on wisdom's lake
    longing to row
    cold truthful air
    what it is to know

    expression is
    the ageless fight
    total freedom
    what it is to write




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