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at Loggerheads

Author: Krinchinian
ASL Info:    20/f/pa
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Class/Type: Deep Thought /Serious
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For my creative writing class in school our teacher gave us a word that she said reminded her of us..we then had to look it up and write a poem about word was "at loggerheads" which means "engaged in dispute" so this is my poem..hope you enjoy

at Loggerheads

Engaged in dispute
Never knowing which way to turn
Afraid to go in the wrong direction
Forever arguing with myself
Now knowing which side to choose
Forever arguing
Never ending

Submitted on 2006-03-28 16:26:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hahah I like it..thats pretty cool..I dont know why i always like doing stuff for school beacuse writing is so free but with this there are guidelines...I like it Its short and sweet...great Job...
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