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    dots Submission Name: Come Back To Medots
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    Author: PolaroidMemory
    ASL Info:    18/F/IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 99/93/28
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 237
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 350



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       I wrote this in a very short amount of time. I had trouble finishing it because I lost my train of thought...hopefully someone can help me think of another stanza for this.


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    dotsCome Back To Medots
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    Inside of my mind
    I listen to your voice.
    No words left behind.
    Thoughts of you make me rejoice.
    I only have one wish;
    For us to be together.
    Your touch is what I miss
    During the stormy weather.

    Come back to me tonight.
    It would make everything alright.
    Come back to me...




    Submitted on 2006-03-28 20:08:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well it is romantic..

    really well emanating the feelings you have.

    I did not get enough to say on the writing, but it is good.

    I may want to use this piece some day.. hehe

    Bye
    | Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]
      an idea for another stanza could be something like the same topic in a different sense. sort of like a...[censored] now i lost my train of thought but i think you know what i mean. just continue with it and write a new stanza. it isnt that hard :-P
    | Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by siroez | [ Reply to This ]



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