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Author:	tomboy
Elite Ratio:	2.5 - 62/61/26
Words:	61

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	151
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	390

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Today is the anniversary of my brothers death. I went to the grave yard and couldn't even cry one solitary tear. I guess it all just put me in a thinking mood of how i have still not forgiven him for what he did. I just want your thoughts about this poem and of how i can improve it.

To The Day dots

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I sit at your grave,
Three years to the day,
Not a single tear shed,
Still angry for what you did.
Pondering what happened.
Unforgiving of the taken actions.
Bitter and angry to the day.
Can it all be true?
With that one choice to take your life...
Will the nightmare ever end?
Is the torment and pain forever to remain?

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I can relate to this piece, because I lost a sister to suicide..I actually shed a few tears just reading your piece,.. and although I was angry with my sister, I have gotten past that and have forgiven her.. it hards to lose someone that close,.. and its even harder wondering why..and although your heart never forgets, it will eventually learn to forgive.. Im sorry about your brother.,. and your pain. thank you for sharing..
Julie J-
| Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by jules271 | [ Reply to This ]

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