Karma
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I wrote a list of words and put the into a poem..
Karma
My heart is a shrapnel Ticking, ready to explode (again) Saturated with terror This bomb has no control It's like a cabal in my heart Filled with abomination My heart is hybrid One side near elimination I pursuit to be provacative But it was abduct I can't be liberated I'm out of luck I'm mostly filled with resentment Annoyed of the obnoxious I'm tattered in my mind I'm thoughtless A bunch of these people are mischievous It's leading to a nightmare, an Incubus Never-the-less It's compelling an Abduction Taking away my liberation Inside lives an intrigue it begins to bane whats left of me... |
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| hey thanks for da stalk!! this poem had really good rhyming i suck at rhymin but u did a pretty good job!! um.. w/e u classify poem is ur buisness!good joB! ~akaila~ | Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ] | Good work on the rhyming, but I don't really get this poem. In your discription, it says it's just a bunch of words you put together to make a poem, but poetry isn't just about words. It's about expressing yourself. | | Posted on 2006-03-28 00:00:00 | by imaginarylight6 | [ Reply to This ] | |
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