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    dots Submission Name: Karmadots
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    Author: Linkins_knot
    ASL Info:    14/Male/Behind a Computer
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 20/46/19
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 148
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 838



    Description:
       I wrote a list of words and put the into a poem..


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    dotsKarmadots
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    My heart is a shrapnel
    Ticking, ready to explode (again)
    Saturated with terror
    This bomb has no control

    It's like a cabal in my heart
    Filled with abomination
    My heart is hybrid
    One side near elimination

    I pursuit to be provacative
    But it was abduct
    I can't be liberated
    I'm out of luck

    I'm mostly filled with resentment
    Annoyed of the obnoxious
    I'm tattered in my mind
    I'm thoughtless

    A bunch of these people are mischievous
    It's leading to a nightmare, an Incubus
    Never-the-less
    It's compelling an Abduction

    Taking away my liberation
    Inside lives an intrigue
    it begins to bane
    whats left of me...




    Submitted on 2006-03-28 21:12:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey thanks for da stalk!! this poem had really good rhyming i suck at rhymin but u did a pretty good job!! um.. w/e u classify poem is ur buisness!good joB!
    ~akaila~
    | Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Good work on the rhyming, but I don't really get this poem. In your discription, it says it's just a bunch of words you put together to make a poem, but poetry isn't just about words. It's about expressing yourself.
    | Posted on 2006-03-28 00:00:00 | by imaginarylight6 | [ Reply to This ]



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