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    dots Submission Name: A View Of The Skydots
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    Author: dragon_princess
    ASL Info:    17/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    0.66 - 1/2/15
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I know I know!! Its not very good but i wrote it when i was five!! This Ones Being Puplished in an anthology called 'Natural Beauty' By United Press LTD


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    dotsA View Of The Skydots
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    As i gaze out at the beautiful swirls of the milkyway
    All misty and mysterious on the blue black sky
    With the planets and stars lighting it up
    Cold and clamey, Oh i don't like it
    Scared, i think of all the storys of aliens i've ever heard
    As anouther spaceship rushes past, i scream
    As loud as possible thinking it was aliens
    But soon i calm down
    Staring out at the scences rushing past
    As i go back home
    We pass that suspicious looking milkyway
    I smile and say goodbye mysterious milkyway
    Home i go, waving to it
    I suddenly thought it smiled back




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