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    dots Submission Name: The Shiny Red Doordots
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    Author: dragon_princess
    ASL Info:    17/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    0.66 - 1/2/15
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 168
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 320



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    dotsThe Shiny Red Doordots
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    As i look in the shiney red door
    I see myself standing tall and proud
    As little as i may be
    With my long blonde hair and
    My little blue dress, with eyes to match
    I still wonder
    No matter how many times i look
    What will happen if i walked
    Through my shiney red door




    Submitted on 2006-03-29 04:39:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I dont get this, you didnt really develop this much and there is no background info to help decipher this piece so i dont really know where you are going with it. Sorry honest opinion.

    Shalom,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]



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