Mmm. Chills. It seems that the oxymorons here were a bit deeper than some I've recently read. There's a waiting lull, a search for the soul that's hiding just around the corner in a world full of corners. Very good. Especially liked the lines: "Under the shadow of the full blown moon Waiting for life to blossom, or death?"
I really like the first stanza that was my favourite part of the piece. The flow in this was a bit off i think the rhyming was a bit forced and didnt flow as well as it could and the piece was a little shorter than i would have liked didnt really develop much of the stryline behind it, but not a bad piece really.