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brand new beat -------------------------------------------
Can you imagine what is real
How cold can blue actually feel
Over yonder and through the fields
Popping up rainbows that became our shield
Is this the new way to context maybe
With treasoned sailors who changed thier navy
Onto ocean water's and across hurried waves
battling whats nurtured failing the rest in shame
the drummers are thumpin a brand new beat
quick down the aisle where they took thier seat
and the thrill of it all resonates so loud
so all the crashes and booms dont make a sound
Submission Name: brand new beat
