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    dots Submission Name: Coydots
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    Author: RedRoseofBlood
    ASL Info:    19/f/outsideyourwindow
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 592/582/135
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 987
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 623



    Description:
       Not the best, but I am getting my feelings out. I hope that you will comment on the ideas and context rather than flow. Thank you.


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    dotsCoydots
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    Talking to you is quite pointless
    Nothing seems to get through all the way
    You say so many contradictions
    I don't know what you mean
    Being indecisive is not a good quality
    At least it's not one that I am looking for
    I think I really do love you
    But not the way I should
    I don't know if I made a mistake
    By letting myself get close to you
    I think it was
    You don't reciprocate the affection
    I am done talking, reasoning, and bargining
    You are not worth my time
    I will just play coy and see what comes my way




    Submitted on 2006-03-29 18:22:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this one reads like a note.. straight forward yet not.. the person talking seems o chare the same indecisivness as well...
    | Posted on 2006-05-01 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]
      I felt like this once,.. I was so awestruck by this guy,.. and he always contradicted himself., he would say things, certain things.. to draw me in, one minute he loved me,..Ill call you tonight.. and then it would be four days til I heard from him.. I tried to break it off, when I realized I had , had enough.. but then he would act like he cared so much,.. he would call 10 times a day... this went on and on for about 9 months,..and finally I had had enough. Whats true in the heart is true, and I knew that.. I just liked him so much and was falling so hard, it was hard to see the truth.. I hope you can find the truth in your relationship..this was an excellent piece and I really enjoyed reading it.
    Julie-
    | Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by jules271 | [ Reply to This ]
      i kindof like it i don't know its like when you take a bite of food and you don't know if you like it till you've had more. sorry random any way i do like it although like all works it could use a little work. thank you forsharing
    Vynom
    | Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]


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