Mehhh...too short. I think that if your were to continue this thought further, it would be freekin' sweet. What you have is good, but as I said, it's too short.
This is pretty short, but it has a good meaning. Some guys aren't like that at all... that's too bad. I think if you do make it longer, I would love it!
I guess you feel when you look into your loves eyes, you never want to look at anybody else. That's really sweet cuz all the guys I have dated, look at every girl but I guess it's my fault for choosing the bad and dumping the good...