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    dots Submission Name: Your eyesdots
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    Author: net
    Elite Ratio:    2.9 - 21/14/6
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 220
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 140



    Description:
       Just a thing I thought up for one of the rp's and decided to put it here.


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    The love I feel when I look in your eyes has yet to fade I wish never to look upon another as you draw me in and my love deepens......"




    Submitted on 2006-03-29 19:34:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Mehhh...too short. I think that if your were to continue this thought further, it would be freekin' sweet. What you have is good, but as I said, it's too short.
    | Posted on 2006-05-06 00:00:00 | by Itzunori | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw,that does sound sweet. Short and sweet. I love things like that. It was pretty good.
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    | Posted on 2006-04-06 00:00:00 | by inkpen | [ Reply to This ]
      That sounds so sweet. Short but sweet. I would try to re-write the first line so it makes more since. Other then that, good job
    | Posted on 2006-03-31 00:00:00 | by Black Angel | [ Reply to This ]
      This is pretty short, but it has a good meaning. Some guys aren't like that at all... that's too bad. I think if you do make it longer, I would love it!

    I guess you feel when you look into your loves eyes, you never want to look at anybody else. That's really sweet cuz all the guys I have dated, look at every girl but I guess it's my fault for choosing the bad and dumping the good...

    Good Job!

    ~*~ Lisa ~*~
    | Posted on 2006-09-02 00:00:00 | by Nani | [ Reply to This ]



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