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    dots Submission Name: The Clouds of Graydots
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    Author: forevertorn
    ASL Info:    16.f.california
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 21/30/19
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 149
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       *sigh* Who knew it could rain so much in Orange County...


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    dotsThe Clouds of Graydots
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    The rain enters softly, through the clouds of gray.
    And I with nothing left to give, want only you to stay.
    But I know you can't be happy, not "truly happy," as you say.
    But I'm afraid I might be too selfish, to let you slip away.
    And I swear I have good intentions, though I'm often led astray.
    But I know that's not always enough to make it to another day.
    I want to say "I love you," but in my mind there's nothing left,
    Save fallen tears and a broken heart and an unsaid apology.

    The rain enters softly, through the clouds of gray.
    It hides away the sunshine, that never used to leave.
    I stare into once loving eyes, whose luster begins to fade.
    A tear falls and I can't even breathe, as you turn to walk away.
    I choke on words that never come, though I desperatly want them to be said.
    Though I know no difference they will make, I can't get them out of my head.
    I only wish I was good enough, to make you want to stay.
    I only wish the sunshine, would break the clouds of gray.





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