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    dots Submission Name: Stone by Stonedots
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    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 310
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 583
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1864



    Description:
       I am not the original writer of this poem. It was sent to me, and I played around with it. I really like it and just wanted to share it. I do not know who was the original author, but if you read this and you are that person, know that I am not claiming this to be my writing. I know this explains alot of how I feel about myself, or at least how I used to feel about myself. Comment if you like, all advice welcome.


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    dotsStone by Stonedots
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    I have a wall you cannot see
    Because its deep inside of me

    It blocks my heart on every side
    And helps emotions there to hide

    You can't reach in, I cant reach out
    You wonder what it's all about

    The wall I built that you can't see
    Results from insecurity

    Each time my tender heart was hurt
    The scars within grew worse and worse

    So stone by stone, I built a wall
    That's now so thick it will not fall

    Please understand that it's not you
    Continue trying to break through

    I want so much to show myself
    And love from you will really help

    So bit by bit, chip at my wall
    Til stone by stone it starts to fall

    I know the process will be slow
    Its never easy to let go

    Of hurts and failures long ingrained
    Upon ones heart from years of pain

    Im so afraid to let you in
    I know I might get hurt again

    I try so hard to break the wall
    But seem to get nowhere at all

    For stone upon stone ive stacked
    And left between not a crack

    The only way to make it fall
    Is imperfections in the wall

    I did the best I could to build
    A perfect wall But there are still

    A few small flaws which are the key
    To breaking through the wall to me


    Please use each flaw to cause a crack
    To knock a stone off the stack

    For just as stone by stone was laid
    With every hurt and every pain

    So stone by stone the wall will break
    As love replaces every ache


    Please be the one who cares enough
    To find the flaws No matter what




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