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    dots Submission Name: copycat(dissing SINceer)dots
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    Author: PROlifik
    ASL Info:    23/m/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.01 - 23/28/21
    Words: 751
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 977
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 4262



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       SINceer05 keeps calling me out so i keep killin em hahaha


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    dotscopycat(dissing SINceer)dots
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    let me set this straight
    the subject of victory should no longer remain a topic of debate
    the world has witnessed you feed of success i create to this date
    its like an energy off everything i make they find some way to make you sound great
    now you wanna tell me you gonna higher the rate?,be freal with out me you had a blank slate
    ill break the bank,you just drunk off half a 211 you drank
    im the cause for your new found improvement
    not your new found power trip and movement,cuz bascily ive yet to lose it
    on your last attack you even questioned yourself in the title+another level?+
    cause we both know ive won several,I TOOK it to another level im way to clever
    never commerical,no rehearsel
    stay apart from populairtys inner circle
    rhymes turn you black blue an purple ill hurt ya
    you dont want another round-so stop taking shots at the underground
    ill put ya under the ground if you utter a sound i wanna hear nothing around
    you worked on yours for days im just doin this now for fun man
    so whats up man,i dropped 800 you dropped a grand fam,damn man
    and im still in demand man,where ya fans man???
    i can help ya out i can shout out ya name man
    it shouldnt come as news to you that i refuse to loose to you
    look at ya rhyme its a mirror image of my style,you just a faker keep ya eyes on ya OWN paper
    you better give me my rhymes back,rewind his rhyme back-now tell me where you would first find that?
    but damn nevermind that i'll bring nine back bend his fuckin spine back,not to kind wit that so dont rhyme like that
    stick to your one line raps and all that other "crossin a fine line" type crap,you aint even got fans to clap
    i pick up the newspaper,turn to the obituary section and damn +SINceer+ what do i see?- a picture of your career
    thats gotta be hard man-heres a twenty to wipe that tear now you can see it clear you lost its over here


    oh i aint done yet


    you wanna go two verses i can go two verses
    fuck it i could go for three just dissin you for free you just a wannabe mcee
    yo check it-your pen is empty-which would explain why you are writting NOTHING
    thats why i keep rushing keep the rhymes busting im fuckin disgusting
    so sick and you know this-i own this,i just gave you a loan in this now you alone in this
    now how could you compete with me you only feelin defeat with me
    now repeat with me-"PROlifik you beat me"
    i'll blaze the booth,hundred percent truth im one hundred percent proof
    indistructable i'll leap off a 12 story roof you just a +scary movie+ spoof
    im tupac in juice so stop beggin for a truce just cause you beggin to produce
    this is gonna be on everyones favorite list- i did you a favor in this diss
    got your name out-AGAIN-copied me with your capitalized +SIN+
    thats the REAL sin,but i still got the real win,damn i honestly do it before i begin
    im just so creative,a real hip hop type native
    so stop your just a disaster beggin for laughter from now on you better think twice who you go after
    you fake ass rapper
    like kanye west ill make sure you "touch the sky" you fuckin wannabe tough guy
    damn havent we ALL had enough of this guy???look at the stuff from this guy
    i know we ALL askin-WHY??all hoping your career will die,your never gonna make a bill-so goodbye
    cause just like any movie you know im gonna live cuz im the +good guy+
    you have no right to harass me but your right elite skills does class-ify me -so you should know to stop tryin me
    its over,its time to end it-sign it and dot it cause lets be honest you dont got it like i got it
    just stop it-im more potent then your product of chronic like ray allen in seattle im supersonic
    i'll leave ya conscience on the wall i aint playin at all,i'll make sure you cant even crawl
    i'll rob you for the grams you land man right where you stand fam knock the miller lite can right outta ya damn hand




    Submitted on 2006-03-30 05:54:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      DAMN!!! SON Calm the phuck down with that sh!t........on the real yo....your lyrics are hot like fire. bringing more heat than that blue flame on a lighter. i aint no lier! all I do is spit truth. i do not need to bring no spoofs. i need not to say no more becuase your words are my proof!


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    | Posted on 2006-03-31 00:00:00 | by L.i. | [ Reply to This ]


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