Description: I wrote this from my friends point of view when her fiance left her. And I had seen him try to change her and make her something she was not. I killed me to see him do this to her and I wrote this for her when she told me he had left.
Not worthy of your love -------------------------------------------
Who is she?
Who is it you want me to be?
What made your love disappear?
What did I do to whither your heart?
How could I not see your love erase me?
How could you kill the sould you once loved?
Why do you hate me?
Why would you change me?
Am I not worthy of you love?
Am I not making you happy?
Is this why you treat me with discust?
Is this why your leaving?
I'm not sure that I would really call this poetry, but this would be a wonderful place to start one heck of a poem. If I were you, I would explore each one of these questions that you asked in here and answer them in a poetic way. As it stands, these are just questions. It's a very sad topic, but you could write this from both points of view. One in regular text and the other in italics and as I said, just explore and put these questions into a poem. Not saying that you would have to use both points of view either, but I think it would be an interesting way of seeing this relationship unfold and ultimately come to a close.
That said, it's horrible when somebody loves someone else for what they want them to be, rather than for what they are. I'm glad that she's out of a situation like this. There isn't anyone out there that should be treated like that and I hope that she realizes now that she deserves better than that.
Let me know if you do happen to do something different with this though, I think you could have something really great here if you show us the dynamics of what you're questioning.
damn, its a sad topic. I've seen it with my own eyes, and as i read this piece i saw a similiar image. As a friend maybe help her realize she is probably worth more what she is recieving in a marriage like that. Then again i know nothing more then this piece. Good expressions & read.